Comments on: can you guys let me know if i should change anything? http://www.resume-writing-advice.com/setting-goals-guide/can-you-guys-let-me-know-if-i-should-change-anything/ Resume Writing Advice, Tips & Career, Job Searches Fri, 03 Sep 2010 20:24:59 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Dr_Adventure http://www.resume-writing-advice.com/setting-goals-guide/can-you-guys-let-me-know-if-i-should-change-anything/comment-page-1/#comment-826 Dr_Adventure Tue, 29 Sep 2009 04:30:59 +0000 http://www.resume-writing-advice.com/setting-goals-guide/can-you-guys-let-me-know-if-i-should-change-anything/#comment-826 Conceptually it is fine. There are some areas to improve the readability. For example In ten years from now, when I am 27 years old, I want to be graduated from college with a bachelor’s degree in psychology and a master’s degree in social work. Would be better as: Ten years from now, when I am 27 years old, I want to have a bachelor’s degree in psychology and a master’s degree in social work. You might look at just cleaning up areas like this. DA<br><b>References : </b><br> Conceptually it is fine. There are some areas to improve the readability. For example

In ten years from now, when I am 27 years old, I want to be graduated from college with a bachelor’s degree in psychology and a master’s degree in social work.

Would be better as:

Ten years from now, when I am 27 years old, I want to have a bachelor’s degree in psychology and a master’s degree in social work.

You might look at just cleaning up areas like this. DA
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