Comments on: I have a good job offer in the paper and not one reply? http://www.resume-writing-advice.com/resume-tools/i-have-a-good-job-offer-in-the-paper-and-not-one-reply/ Resume Writing Advice, Tips & Career, Job Searches Sat, 18 Sep 2010 01:48:59 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: debbie http://www.resume-writing-advice.com/resume-tools/i-have-a-good-job-offer-in-the-paper-and-not-one-reply/comment-page-1/#comment-2871 debbie Sun, 29 Nov 2009 13:04:59 +0000 http://www.resume-writing-advice.com/resume-tools/i-have-a-good-job-offer-in-the-paper-and-not-one-reply/#comment-2871 Maybe be more descriptive? Imports/ Exports, are you a dealership or a shop? Maybe include the contact name and company name (many people are leery of sending their resume out blindly, especially since you are using a PO box). Also include a salary range will probably help.. try something like this (only change names to reflect your company, and your salary range): 'Joes Mechanic and Service shop seeking experienced auto technician for domestic and import service. Must have own tools, prefer ASE certified. Salary $20/ hour DOE. Fax resume to Joe at 123-456-7890 or mail to: PO Box 74.<br><b>References : </b><br>Former Director of HR (and wrote a lot of job ads!!!) Maybe be more descriptive? Imports/ Exports, are you a dealership or a shop? Maybe include the contact name and company name (many people are leery of sending their resume out blindly, especially since you are using a PO box). Also include a salary range will probably help..

try something like this (only change names to reflect your company, and your salary range):

‘Joes Mechanic and Service shop seeking experienced auto technician for domestic and import service. Must have own tools, prefer ASE certified. Salary $20/ hour DOE. Fax resume to Joe at 123-456-7890 or mail to: PO Box 74.
References :
Former Director of HR (and wrote a lot of job ads!!!)

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